suggest editorial review of this page and the following one
Summary: suggest editorial review of this page and the following one
Description: There is a bit of duplication in the information, a bit of insider terminology, and some general proof-reading would be good. Is this the right stage yet, though, or are we focussing on functionality at this point?
Created: 2015-05-06 12:17:47.962
Updated: 2015-05-06 18:16:12.893
Resolved: 2015-05-06 18:16:12.871
Comment: The text has gone through several iterations of review by several POs. Please reopen this issue when it's possible to indicate duplicates. Thanks!
Created: 2015-05-06 18:16:12.891
Updated: 2015-05-06 18:16:12.891